I finally read through my DREAMSHIP notes from the fine folks at ScriptQuack. Very impressive. They did a great job of letting me know what the script needs to improve.
So with just under a month to go before the Nicholl deadline, I’m taking their suggestions and trying to rebuild this thing from the ground up. I had a feeling it may be an extensive rewrite, and I was right. There’s a lot that has to change.
It’s not insurmountable, but I will call it formidable. This is really going to require a daily effort. I think I can get through Act One by the end of this week, then really concentrate on Act Two, where most of the rewriting is necessary. Act Three I’m still figuring out.
-Final comment on Wondercon. Fun as usual. I got to see it from both the Dad and Casual Comic Geek perspectives. For the former, that involved stopping at all the video game booths, looking for Yu-Gi-Oh! cards and commenting on anything and everything V saw. Since we went on Friday, it wasn’t that crowded. Overall, a good time.
I returned Sunday with my pal Neil. We usually spend less time among the vendors and focus more on the self-publishers and independents. They’re always more interesting anyway. I may not be crazy about some of the subject matter, but there’s a certain charm to them and their work. It’s really great to see somebody doing what they love, and a lot of them have a lot of talent.
Even better, you don’t have to wait for hours on end to get an autograph or tell them you like their stuff, and they seem happy to talk to you. I’ve always tried to support the little guy.
Movie of the Moment: We watched THE EXPENDABLES last night. Mega-cheesy throwback to the 80s. Stallone wrote and directed it. From a writer’s perspective, it could have used a few more rewrites.
I was expecting it to be more mission-centric, but it just dragged and took forever to get to the interesting parts. K said this would be a perfect Filmsack movie. I agree.
Tonight we started RED. SO much better. But it’s Warren Ellis, so I’d expect nothing less.